Blog #9: WP2 Draft

Introduction:

            School pride is rooted to something specific, donning colors, logos and jersey numbers. The availability of such apparel is not hard to find, especially for such a large and popular university as ASU. Four of the most well-known places to stop by and shop for that sporting event or Maroon and Gold spirit are the on-campus Sun Devil Store, the College Store, Campus Corner, and the Student Book Center. Since demand for collegiate products are unlikely to ever decrease, these stores are visited often. This being said, they should each be doing their best satisfy elements such as variety, affordability, and quality. “We already know that absolute monopoly and perfect competition type of markets are not that pervasive, yet businesses try to avoid perfect competition and strive to go for absolute monopoly so they can enjoy no competition and exploit the customer sentiments for buying.” (http://www.blurtit.com/q466164.html) I hope to establish a clear difference in the atmosphere in all four of these locations, regarding elements such as the one I have mentioned.

Annotation #1: Sun Devil Campus Store

Located in the center of campus, the Sun Devil Campus Store offers a vast amount of Arizona State’s official collegiate products and merchandise. Because it’s considered the primary source of ASU’s books and apparel, it is slightly more costly than the other three shops located outside of the campus. Despite that detail, the store offers a very welcoming atmosphere and a terrific first taste to the college environment.

1.)What type of ASU affiliated clothing does the store carry?

·         -Carries brands like Nike, Adidas, Reebok and overall the most well-known brands to carry collegiate merchandise.

       -Apparel: T-shirts, jerseys (football, basketball, baseball, etc), caps, snapbacks, sweaters, hoodies, pullovers, sweatpants, tanks, socks and much more!

       -Accessories: Washable team tattoos, spirit beads, team plush toys, mugs, banners, flags, jewelry, etc

2.)How affordable are the items?

       -The Sun Devil Campus Store is definitely not the most affordable shop on the list, but the prices are nothing you wouldn’t expect. $50-$80+ for jerseys, $15-$30 T-Shirts, $15-$20 caps.

       -20% off clothing or gift items coupons are scattered across campus in the Student Handbooks and Student Insiders.

3.)What kind of events or occasions is the store good for?

       -Sporting events: football, basketball, baseball, etc

       -School spirit: Fridays on campus

       -Gifts: ASU fanatics and alumni

4.)Customer Reviews

         -http://www.yelp.com/biz/sun-devil-campus-stores-tempe

Annotation #2: The College Store

The College Store is most famous for its location on the far east side of campus on Rural Road. It is not nearly as popular as the other three shops, due to the site being much further away than the rest and has a much smaller variety than that of the Sun Devil Campus Store. However, it is very popular in its affordability. The College Store offers some of the lowest prices on ASU affiliated apparel.

1.) What kind of ASU affiliated clothing does the store carry?

The store carries many of the basics, caps, shirts, throwback jerseys. They offer some similar Nike products to the ones of the other three stores, therefore those specific items cost the same

2.) How affordable are the items?

The College Store is one of the few shops to actually have decent $9.95 ASU shirts. Regular shirts range between $10 to $20.

3.) What kind of events and occasions is the store good for?

-Sporting events: football, basketball, baseball, etc

-School spirit: Fridays on campus

-Gifts: ASU fanatics and alumni

4.) Customer Reviews

       -http://linktown.azfamily.com/biz/college-store/tempe/az/85281/290883

Annotation #3: Campus Corner

1.) What kind of ASU affiliated clothing does the store carry?

2.) How affordable are the items?

3.) What kind of events and occasions is the store good for?

  -Sporting events: football, basketball, baseball, etc

  -School spirit: Fridays on campus

  -Gifts: ASU fanatics and alumni

4.) Customer Reviews

         http://linktown.azfamily.com/biz/student-book-center/tempe/az/85281/290006?sl=21144458&so=0

Annotation #4: Student Book Center

1.) What kind of ASU affiliated clothing does the store carry?

2.) How affordable are the items?

3.) What kind of events and occasions is the store good for?

-Sporting events: football, basketball, baseball, etc

-School spirit: Fridays on campus

-Gifts: ASU fanatics and alumni

4.) Customer Reviews

       http://linktown.azfamily.com/biz/campus-corner/tempe/az/85281/290008?sl=21144126&so=0

Blog #8

1.   Topic: Where to Get Your ASU Gear

a.   Places: Sun Devil Bookstores/Campus Stores, College Store, Student Book Center, Campus Corner

2.   Evaluative Criteria and Research Ideas

a. What type of ASU affiliated clothing does the store carry?

-Sun Devil Bookstores/Campus Stores: 

http://www.bkstr.com/Home/10001-196905-1?cm_mmc=iCrossing-_-PaidSearch-_-SchoolSpecific_-Google

-College Store: https://foursquare.com/v/the-college-store/4cd0a97a7f56a14314b9cfa6

-Student Book Center: http://www.studentbookcenter.com/home.aspx

-Campus Corner: https://plus.google.com/108934269478991287689/about?hl=en

b. How affordable are the items?

- Sun Devil Campus Store is the most expensive of the four shops, selling all collegiate licensed products at its original price under expensive brands like Nike.

- The College Store is definitely cheaper than the Sun Devil Campus Store, but has a much smaller variety.

- The Student Book Center seems to be the most preferable by public opinion, it offers variety (although it is still not as big as the Sun Devil Campus Store), quality, and affordable prices.

- The Campus Corner offers the smallest variety of all four shops, mainly because they split their merchandise between apparel and food. However, they remain fairly affordable.

c. What kind of events or occasions are the stores good for?

-Sporting events

-Spirit events, homecoming week, gold Fridays, etc

- Arizona State Fanatics

-Gifts

d. Customer Reviews

-Sun Devil Campus Store: 

http://www.yelp.com/biz/sun-devil-campus-stores-tempe

-College Store: 

http://linktown.azfamily.com/biz/college-store/tempe/az/85281/290883

-Student Book Center: 

http://linktown.azfamily.com/biz/student-book-center/tempe/az/85281/290006?sl=21144458&so=0

-Campus Corner: 

http://linktown.azfamily.com/biz/campus-corner/tempe/az/85281/290008?sl=21144126&so=0

Blog #7

Before people visit shopping centers, restaurants, and other businesses new to them, they are likely to look them up online to find out more about the location and service before taking the time to drive there. Consumers want to know details from price range, service, convenience and vibe. To get a god feel of all this prior to making their trip, they read reviews. Yelp.com is an incredibly vast website that allows customers of all types of businesses to submit their personal reviews of the location.  The site covers everything from local shops to restaurants on the opposite coast, making it accessible to everyone everywhere. The reviews are majorly based on quality of service, with an interest in price range. A common review is influenced by a single personal experience at any business, restaurant or industry.  People describe their chain of events leading up to their “1 star” review for poor service or the amazing time they had at a restaurant with “5 stars” quality food. For example, Micah T from Phoenix sums up her 4-star rating with a quick review, “I love Zipps! I have been going to Zipps for years mainly to watch sports on one of the many televisions they have playing or for their amazing wings and Happy Hour. The wings are better grilled too so try them that way!”

Although our writing project will be more of researched and backed-up evaluations compared to that of the reviewers on Yelp.com, the reviews help to acknowledge and discover things I should perhaps try and avoid in my draft. For example, a personal touch might be okay, it might even make it more interesting. However, making it clear that your opinion of a certain place is strongly influenced from a one-time experience, or just experience overall, should be avoided. That is definitely not using research and facts to meet the idea behind the writing project. Using trusted sources for this research is also essential to making “evidence” and facts credible and creating a more balanced evaluation on my chosen locations.

Chapter 8: Evaluating Movies & TV shows "Once Upon A Time"

Photo/Video credit: ABC

The very first impression I had of the fall series Once Upon A Time (on the ABC network) is that the story line and idea was intriguingly original and unique compared to the majority of today's television. The takes every fairy tale ever known to the modern day child and created one world for them all. The series takes place in Storybrooke, Maine, a fictional "trapped in time" town in which its residents are all characters from numerous fairy tales. They were transported to the real world (which is portrayed as modern-day) by a curse from none other than the Evil Queen and stripped of their memory of the fairy-tale world and their identities. The protagonist, Emma Swan, is supposed to be Snow White's daughter, whom was transported from the fairy tale world before the curse hit. She is the intended heroine of the show; she is the only one who can break the curse and recover the residents of Storybrookes' identities and previous lives. What's so interesting about this fantasy-drama is that every single episode in the first season tells a back story of one of the fairy tale characters while also keeping up with their situation in the "real world". You get to know every single character from Snow White to Red Riding Hood and Pinocchio. The story goes deep into each character's previous life and how it connects to the curse and their persona in the real world. It is completely mind blowing to watch how the creators of the show were able to take children's fairy tales and give them much more than the simple "happy ending" story, and still manage to tie them all to each other. This is where the show shines and proves to be a genius break from reality TV and repeated shows that all seem to be just like the last.

http://storybrookemainerp.tumblr.com/

I don't typically go for fantasy genre in TV shows or movies but Once Upon A Time has become my one and only exception. It has never failed to surprise me with all its twists and is anything but predictable. The show has brought back childhood fantasy worlds and made it possible for even adults to follow its unbelievable story. With the second season freshly premiered as of Tuesday, it is probable that Once Upon A Time will enchant its millions of viewers once again and excel in this fall's TV shows.

Blog #5: Writing Final Summary

Arizona State University, University Bridge

 

In my writing project I analyzed the view, space, and existence of the University Bridge through the lens of another author. The University Bridge inspired me to embrace a new perspective after our class readings, including my chosen text, Mark Twain’s “Two Views of the Mississippi.” Twain’s story led him from one perspective of the river to another, after getting to know it well. Twain’s first perspective is almost childlike, in awe of the majesty and beauty of the river.  After Twain spends more time on the river, his view of it changes to one that is almost cynical.  I transitioned this effect to my writing project because it described exactly how I feel about ASU’s University Bridge. My first impression was solely based on the bridge’s appearance, arched, beautiful, and structured. It made me excited or the day where I would cross it on a daily basis, enjoying the walk and of course, the view. However, like Twain and his river, my perspective changed when I became more familiar with it each day. I went from a pedestrian to a student, just like Twain went from a first time admirer of the river to steam boating through it often enough to lose sight of its beauty. While my view of the University Bridge now is of the love-hate sort, Mark Twain’s seemed to remain permanently tainted. His lens was the best fit for my writing project because not only did it fit the situation, but the emotions seemed to fit as well.

 

Blog #4: Drafting

        

In Mark Twain’s “Two Views of the Mississippi”, he emphasizes his idea of changing perspectives from first impression to veteran, which can also be used to change one’s view of University Bridge. A simple concrete structure, meant to connect the students in the northern residence halls to the heart of the Arizona State Tempe campus. Herds of kids commute daily across the bridge, a diversity of hurried underclassmen and calm staff members. The University Bridge, connected to the famous Palm Walk, was supported in design by a chiropractor with the goal to relieve pressure from fellow students and pedestrians’ lower back and legs. It offers an impressive view of the busy University Drive road during the day and an even more inspiring scene at sundown when the city lights are at their brightest. The University Bridge is the perfect place to capture it all at once.

The bridge stands, arched, symmetrical, and two sided. Anyone going up from either side of the bridge is presented with the option of steps, or plain runway cement. Although the steps are normally easier to take, most students subconsciously stay to their right, wherever it is that their destination lies. Personally, the first time I went up the University Bridge, I wanted to take the steps over the feeling of climbing a hill. But naturally, I found my feet maneuvered towards the flat, ramp style side to the right. “Why did I come this way?” I asked myself, several times. It is like a rule of humanity among crowds that this very bridge brought to the surface.

As a novice to this particular walkway, I could not help but be nothing more than enchanted and stricken by how amazing it felt to stand at the very top of the bridge, how stunning the humble view off the ground in the middle of a busy road looked, nor how it felt to finally come down and immediately miss a small version of being “at the top of the world”.

Like in Mark Twain’s “Two Views of the Mississippi”, there are countless attributes and beauty that this landmark possessed and then rapidly began to lose as I better familiarized myself with it. In the beginning, the impression of the bridge is typical for everyone; it brings together flocks of people, all sharing the similar goal to get where they need to be. It overlooks one of the busiest, most popular streets in the city of Tempe, rain or shine. The bridge connects one area to another, and even serves as a temporary place of loitering for some kids at nightfall. It is unarguably one of the campus’ most memorable structures.

As soon as one gets accustomed to the bridge, every trip up and down becomes a routine as well as a mission, mimicking exercises like cardio and jogging. Getting to the very top is almost painful; especially when the scorching Arizona sun is bearing down on you and all you can think about is making it across the bridge as fast as possible. Arriving to the foot of the bridge presents one with the set of steps. The steps are small, a little too small, and difficult to walk over for impatient individuals like myself. People rush past each other and skate boarders clash with others. One can suddenly find themselves dreading the trip up and down the arch University Bridge. What once seemed so convenient and thrilling to take advantage of, is now another thing to avoid while making my way to class. Much like Twain’s story about the river, the bridge loses its simplicity and beauty:

Now when I had mastered the language of this water, and had come to know every trifling feature that bordered the great river as familiarly as I knew the letters of the alphabet, I had made a valuable acquisition. But I had lost something, too. I had lost something which could never be restored to me while I lived. All the grace, the beauty, the poetry, had gone out of the majestic river! (Twain 208)

After learning how to pilot a riverboat, Twain lost the ability to see the simple beauties in the river. He could only see the dangers in the river's subtle details. In the story, Twain fondly recalls a memory of when he had witnessed a beautiful sunset when he was still new to steamboating. He described the majestic reflections of the fading sunlight, and the delicate waves of the water. He then goes on to describe how after becoming a pilot he would only recognize upcoming winds from the sunset and a dissolving sand bar from the bubbles and ripples. Where he had once found beauty in the river, he could then only find work.

The first time I found myself on the other side of the University Bridge, I thought about whether crossing it made up for avoiding waiting at the crosswalk with the others. It seemed as though half of the northern resident area students continued to use the stoplight, while others rushed to the University Bridge. Was the bridge everything I anticipated? Is it everything I thought it was? Does the beauty of overlooking the heart of the college town worth the troublesome characteristics of the bridge that have presented themselves? The view from the bridge has never changed, whereas my opinion of the bridge itself has dissolved immensely.

Chapters 2,3 & 7: Writing With A Purpose

"Every writer has a purpose, or reason, for writing." (Palmquist 28)

This is the line that most captured my attention from the couple of chapters I read today. It might sound simple, unimportant; maybe even a little cliché to some, but one thing rings true is that this statement can be argued in several ways.

How so?
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Book

When writers have something to say, a story to tell, or an opinion to voice, they will write with purpose. When they are inspired by morals, experiences and controversy, writers will write with a goal and a message. However, there is an exception to writers writing with a "purpose". A writer can pick up a pen with nothing more than the intention to exercise the passion they hold for the art of writing. I, my own testament, know for a fact I write for the sake of writing the majority of the time. I don't want to be told what to write about, that is the beauty of creative writing. When I write with purpose, I am writing to reach the objective of a classroom assignment. When I write on my own, I write for the fulfillment of doing what I love.

In the seventh chapter, Palmquist describes the role one takes on when writing analytically. "Analysis involves adopting the role of interpreter. Writers who adopt this role help readers understand the origins, qualities, significance, or potential impact of a subject." (Palmquist 210) This was interesting to me because this type of writing can be related to informative pieces, but with the ability to portray what the writer interpreted from the subject research. Hence, providing personal perspective along with useful information. Although this is an excellent way to practice writing, what I found most sapid about this chapter was the section of Literary Criticism. Any aspiring creative writer should become familiar with literary criticism, which is defined as "the analysis of literature, broadly defined as works of fiction, poetry, drama, and creative nonfiction." (Palmquist 225) Overall, these few chapters have provided me with great insight to ways to analyze writing both fiction and nonfiction, and my own and someone else's.






http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Newspaper